Layout For My Subdomain Options

[do0kie]

i've been working on this layout for my subdomain. its of from first to last. i tried not to use too many brushes. probably not that great,but i like it.what do you guys think? what could i improve on it?

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^^same layout,just doesnt have text.and used less brushes/effects

which one is better? constructive criticism and opinions would be greatly appreciated.

[Heathasm]

i didnt want to use too many colors,becuase when i use a lot of colors in my layouts.. i dont like how they turn out. how could i make it more creative?

the lyrics are squished,but i wanted them that way
thanks everyone 

i dont know how to tell you to be more creative
what i would do is make the place for your links horizontal instead of repeating down to the bottom like it does on most other personal blog/site layouts

i mean..im pretty much just picturing what its going to look like once you upload it and add your content i hope you know some cool coding tricks to help your page have more effect when people come by it

hmm that critique would be off topic

but for the image...and background..i would deffinately change the background to some thing else...i think your main problem is that you dont have any white in it and it needs it