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post May 2 2005, 04:10 PM
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Time to unleash my new dope track//
wish we hope to bring back 2pac//
i do things that no one can do//
it might not be clear, but ill make it true//
more money problems thats true.//
cuz the more money i make is a problem for you!//
suprised that you people never knew//
why, ill make your mic expell//
cuz all you do is spit on da mic to rebel//
pass years in freestylin, ive excelled//
you dont belong here, just go die in hell//
 
 
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post May 2 2005, 07:28 PM
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1. True and True don't rhyme.
2. As stated by nightmare4taki, you stole lyrics
3. As stated by sikdragon, 2 pac and track don't rhyme.
4. As stated by Angel_Cece, you can't die in hell.
5.
Definitions of expel:
verb: as from a country
verb: put out or expel from a place
Example: "The child was expelled from the classroom"
verb: eliminate, as of bodily substances
verb: cause to flee
verb: remove from office
5a. Expell isn't a word, but expel is (omg, I'm Spelling Bee champ).
5b. A mic cannot expel or be expeled
6. 'i do things that no one can do//' I suppose you can, like posting 17 raps when all you get is negative feedback and still not get any better. sad.gif
Just summing things up for you.
 

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Statistik   rap *new*   May 2 2005, 04:10 PM
xoxo_koala_kisses_   Umm... how pleasant. "Dope" Track. Haha...   May 2 2005, 04:42 PM
sikdragon   powerful words from a small ass wigga- you wishin ...   May 2 2005, 04:47 PM
rOckThISshYt   QUOTE(sikdragon @ May 2 2005, 5:47 PM)powerfu...   May 3 2005, 06:39 PM
sikdragon   2-pac, the a is an ahh sound like the 'o' ...   May 2 2005, 04:48 PM
Angel_Cece   " you dont belong here, just go die in hell//...   May 2 2005, 05:00 PM
nightmare4taki   That was a nice rap although you bit a line from C...   May 2 2005, 06:48 PM
miszSERENiTY   GIVE IT UP ! PLEASE ! I BEG U ! SPARE ...   May 2 2005, 07:12 PM
Paradox of Life   1. True and True don't rhyme. 2. As stated by ...   May 2 2005, 07:28 PM
Cake.   you're dumb. :puke:   May 2 2005, 07:46 PM
Rachel is love   Jason we went over this You suck at it Please quit...   May 2 2005, 08:07 PM
xbr0kensmil3   ^^ LOL !! I agree with what AkaRyux said.   May 2 2005, 08:58 PM
DaToNeViEtBoI916   very good, very very good. PSYCH! okay hones...   May 2 2005, 09:11 PM
miszSERENiTY   I`m gonna be a copycat and follow crazyjew The...   May 2 2005, 09:41 PM
uLoVeMikeRoch   Jesus f**king christ jason. Do i need to go to you...   May 2 2005, 10:57 PM
yukichan   sigh.. why do u continue to do this? if u r going ...   May 3 2005, 04:42 AM
sikdragon   if it doesnt make sense to you, dont reply.   May 3 2005, 12:46 PM
Paradox of Life   Actually, saying something doesn't make sense ...   May 3 2005, 03:06 PM
sikdragon   it's rap. rap doesnt make sense to most people...   May 3 2005, 05:14 PM
DaToNeViEtBoI916   QUOTE(sikdragon @ May 3 2005, 5:14 PM)it...   May 3 2005, 08:47 PM
nightmare4taki   QUOTE(sikdragon @ May 3 2005, 4:14 PM)it...   May 3 2005, 10:30 PM
sikdragon   thanks. WHAT part of not exactly poetry dont you ...   May 3 2005, 10:33 PM
DaToNeViEtBoI916   what part of rap is poetry don't you understan...   May 3 2005, 11:24 PM
Im So Vain   sikdragon i dont know if your rap was spose to b...   May 3 2005, 11:29 PM
sikdragon   it was. QUOTEwhat part of rap is poetry don't ...   May 4 2005, 12:43 PM
not_your_average   you guys, c'mon! don't stop, jason. yo...   May 4 2005, 01:03 PM


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