Petals in the Moonlight, to tara Options

[sikdragon]

Petals in the Moonlight


I vaguely remember the blooms of that one night-
the vivid luster of those petals etched unto my sight-
just a single flower shouting up to the moon-
just a few glances down keeps it coming back renewed-
these petals have fallen from their blossom, but still-
they're just as luscious as the day they first spoke of awe-
some days they still remain brighter than their counterparts-
just wonder what sparks your true splendor of you that only shines through when truth is found-
among thieves-
and virtuous fiends-
still unlikely, but this legend has foretold beauty beyond imagination-
you've given just a taste, not even enough to be taken into consideration-
an abbreviation-
ever tender hearted differently departed, you're firery and incredib-
believe the fact that your face makes even fields of wild flowers seem insipid-
your voice could be compared to the most amazing nightengale-
'tis that night you sang, that even the strongest willed of the urbaknigts fell-
all the beauties of nature brought to the street-
just like tupac, you too were the rose that grew from concrete-
i've yet to give up belief-
one day that bloom will come back and be-
the light of the night, set strong and beautifully-

[Paradox of Life]

I like it. I like your wordings; it's really descriptive and makes a picture in your mind (like what iNyCxShoRT said). Why do the first 4 lines rhyme, though? If you had the intention to rhyme, you should've rhymed all the way or not rhymed at all. It sounded a little weird, but that's all I have to say