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 Apr 30 2005, 02:34 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
cant i learn...
two feet firm on nothing race to nothing rat race to nothing piss it away burn it down all fall down Down 20,000 leagues under the see me run see spot run manic depressive giggling with the needle in his arm smile reflected in tears heroin of isolation addiction to friction supersition dont rhyme half rhyme half beat miss a beat - policemen beat down the dreams blazing guns burning sun the victory aint to be won its not a game play the game its not a game play again try again game over |
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May 1 2005, 07:29 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
I guess I was a bit confused, but it makes more sense now and I've learned to like this poem. ^_^; I like these lines:
'giggling with the needle in his arm smile reflected in tears heroin of isolation' It's a really good combination of so many ideas and how they rhyme. Great job, as always. Yeah.. Appearantly all the girls like you o_O; I think you're pretty kewl. I wish there were more people like you in my town. I NEED TO GO TO ENGLAND >_< |
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racoons > you Game over Apr 30 2005, 02:34 PM
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INTENSE
and... May 1 2005, 10:08 AM Weird addiction *faints*
*wakes up* I LOVE JAMES. *faints again*
... May 1 2005, 01:01 PM racoons > you QUOTEkind of confusing...i don't really unders... May 1 2005, 01:01 PM xoxo_koala_kisses_ *Glomps James*
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