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 Apr 23 2005, 09:48 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
that much more to cry
a penny-worth of sigh a tear drop's full of truth and a crystal clear sky lets me know of power blood running through our dreams ten times ten is fifty everythings upside down a million whispers echo a silence worth of sound fifteen ways to get nowhere one straight unwinding road curving through the zig zag got to get you home fifteen ways to get nowhere only one to love |
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Apr 30 2005, 02:59 PM
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 Residential Crazy Child Group: Member Posts: 934 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,897 |
You do have a way with words.
I love the last two lines the best. It describes life and has a bit of romance in it. Good Job ^^ 
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racoons > you ok... a new poem Apr 23 2005, 09:48 AM
Rachel is love I like it! It is different and has a good flow... Apr 23 2005, 10:51 AM sammi rules you that's really good, jamesy. Apr 23 2005, 11:00 AM xXirockhardXx QUOTEfifteen ways to get nowhere
only one to love
... Apr 23 2005, 12:33 PM islandgirl4eva QUOTEfifteen ways to get nowhere
only one to love
... Apr 23 2005, 12:53 PM stephinika i love it, the last lines especially. it flows so ... Apr 23 2005, 01:22 PM gladz612 it's fantastic! Apr 23 2005, 01:23 PM racoons > you thanks everyone ;)
there is a lot more traffic i... Apr 23 2005, 02:58 PM nightmare4taki I like this poem.
Poetry always sweeps the ladies... Apr 23 2005, 04:18 PM imsofargone711 really like the poem.. but dont you think someones... Apr 23 2005, 04:28 PM racoons > you noy really.... i mean if anyone wants to use it fo... Apr 23 2005, 05:17 PM Spiritual Winged Aura Wonderful peom, You're very good w/ adj and de... Apr 23 2005, 06:00 PM toodlepops. That's really awesome. =] Apr 25 2005, 12:25 AM IamRad wow. I really love ur writing. amazing job, once a... Apr 27 2005, 04:31 PM krnl0v3r oh i love it! great job james! Apr 27 2005, 10:52 PM
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