RAP BY ME, i'm back!! -kangsta |
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 Apr 25 2005, 05:42 PM
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I'm a superstar with pimp hands
i shoot fast back 2 back like rubba bands kangsta is the way to be cuz that's the only way you can see u see me on my white tee |
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Apr 29 2005, 03:11 PM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you!  Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
I actually thought this was okay. Except for the last line. It made me laugh because it made absolutely no sense. It's good to keep it short for now. When you can write, you can make your raps longer and reduce the chance of making a bad line and getting negative feedback.
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Statistik RAP BY ME Apr 25 2005, 05:42 PM
ocpimple you lost me with the last two lines =/
kind of... ... Apr 25 2005, 05:44 PM DaToNeViEtBoI916 Stop trying to be so damn HARD! Apr 25 2005, 07:16 PM stolenantics *points and laughs* "kangsta is the way to be... Apr 25 2005, 07:19 PM nightmare4taki Its not bad. At least you didn't copy and past... Apr 25 2005, 07:54 PM sharerol Hmm? Um, I'm having trouble understanding tha... Apr 25 2005, 08:14 PM ApocalypseAelis Jason...just stop...we've already told you you... Apr 25 2005, 08:19 PM Chii oh jason...how i wish you listened to my reply... Apr 25 2005, 11:15 PM sikdragon Jason, Jason, Jason. the word Kangsta is so lame. ... Apr 26 2005, 09:47 AM
uLoVeMikeRoch QUOTE(sikdragon @ Apr 26 2005, 9:47 AM)Jason,... May 1 2005, 08:51 AM x3__iGiVEup you killed the song with the last line -_- Apr 26 2005, 08:36 PM x____duckii What is up with you and the word "kangsta... Apr 26 2005, 08:38 PM miszSERENiTY Umm the 1st two lines were okay but umm you got a ... Apr 26 2005, 08:40 PM clarissa i thought it was sort of okay, but the last line r... Apr 26 2005, 08:52 PM F_L_I_P no no no dont tell him to stop guys. i love seeing... Apr 27 2005, 07:30 PM hollesther Jason...Jason ..Jason You try too hard. Apr 27 2005, 07:39 PM wayne sounds like a riddle.
nice try... but.. try, try ... Apr 27 2005, 09:10 PM ..:loveee.NuTTii Those last few lines confused me. Apr 28 2005, 03:58 PM ermfermoo Pimp.... hands? What? Apr 28 2005, 04:00 PM racoons > you why did you inculde a line about your t-shirt? tha... Apr 28 2005, 04:07 PM FoOd Ummmmm, nice try...? Apr 28 2005, 10:10 PM Funky Buddha Damn kid, you are hopeless Apr 28 2005, 10:12 PM KissMe2408 ah....ah.....ah.......
ok people...atleast he sub... Apr 28 2005, 11:51 PM yukichan wow..this topic has a lot of replies..lol..
sigh..... Apr 29 2005, 02:38 AM sikdragon he doesnt respond to good feedback so screw him. h... Apr 29 2005, 11:33 PM iNyCxShoRT better luck next time. Apr 30 2005, 11:33 AM Just_Dream The first line doesn't even make sense. How do... Apr 30 2005, 07:20 PM xcaitlinx " you see me on my white tee "
....as i... Apr 30 2005, 07:51 PM PinkTrash dudeee;
no offence, but really short and pointless... Apr 30 2005, 11:00 PM sikdragon if you dont get it, then you're in no position... May 1 2005, 01:59 AM xiMiJix im sorry about this ...but i cant stop my emotions... May 1 2005, 07:11 PM |
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