the brave, a new poem, by moi |
 Apr 25 2005, 11:53 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
liquid sunlight
molten wave damn the cowards f**k the brave fortune favours the brave dreamers stumble believers have no skill poets bleed their souls out we're all looking to kill it takes just a moment to kill five times five aint twenty but one plus one is three when viewed through someone else's eyes this isnt you and me there's one more than you and me strangled by redemption i dont need you to forgive i'll never say im sorry to die is just to live there's no more time to live spring time turns to winter the oak tree's frosty glare you think that you're so righteous when you didn't even care? i know you didnt care *************** ooh... it actualy has STANZAS.... my goodness... |
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Apr 25 2005, 11:16 PM
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 Want fries with that? Group: Member Posts: 692 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,652 |
Wonderful job, I loved it!
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racoons > you the brave Apr 25 2005, 11:53 AM
stephinika ooh i like it james! it flows nicely and i qui... Apr 25 2005, 10:57 PM
IamRad QUOTE(stephinika @ Apr 25 2005, 10:57 PM)ooh ... Apr 27 2005, 04:28 PM agirlnamed_aly I really liked it. Loved the repetition of words a... Apr 27 2005, 12:09 AM racoons > you thanks for the feedback, all Apr 27 2005, 03:55 PM X_Demented_Mind_X nice poem hare! Apr 27 2005, 04:05 PM racoons > you QUOTEnice poem hare!
thanks! but you can ... Apr 28 2005, 03:12 PM ..:loveee.NuTTii That was beautiful,
I love the repetition at the e... Apr 28 2005, 03:31 PM RiddleMeWonders Oh my..
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