A silenced Scream |
 Apr 24 2005, 06:35 PM
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 Want fries with that?  Group: Member Posts: 692 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,652  |
There’s always a voice inside me,
That screams and calls my name, This voice always says that I’ve done wrong, But am I the one to blame? I try to shut this voice out, To shut out all the screams, But this voice is always with me, Screaming in my dreams, This voice in me is secret, One that never shows, But secretly inside of me, The voice echoes from below. Yes...my poem isn't the best...constructive criticism and comments please? |
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Apr 25 2005, 08:20 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
I like it a lot. It has a meaning that many people can relate to. I do too, sometimes.
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LadyXTor A silenced Scream Apr 24 2005, 06:35 PM
stephinika i liked it. i can relate so very well to it, and y... Apr 24 2005, 06:47 PM yukichan i like it..good job! Apr 25 2005, 01:39 AM belg such profound words... Apr 25 2005, 04:59 AM LadyXTor Thanks all! ^^ Apr 25 2005, 05:22 PM smrkangl i can very well relate! awesome poem! :] Apr 25 2005, 08:46 PM
skateforfree i liked it Apr 25 2005, 10:55 PM |
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