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I'll Get You Back
akjsd
post Apr 24 2005, 03:42 AM
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screams, shouts, yells, cries,
gasps, cuts, surrending sighs .
fake smiles, mourning eyes,
never stops, unending lies .

rumours spread, like butter on toast,
but one thing's forsure, i hate you most .
sure, hate is strong,
but this aint wrong .

if i could, i'd break your bones,
why cant you all just leave me alone .
beat me, hit me, use and abuse me,
all this attention makes me see clearly .

you're not who i thought you were,
things like this happens in such a blur .
untold secrets and flaming betrayals,
this is when our friendship fails .

you thought that you could bring me down ?
turn my bright smile into a frown ?
tear me apart, piece by piece ?
but you dont hurt me, not the least .

i'm stronger than you think,
i'm a harder ship to sink .
i'll forgive, but never forget,
i wont stop, till the score is set .

i'll paste a smile on my face,
but inside, i'm thinkin` of what took place .
i'll get you back, this i swear ,
and my pain, we'll all share .
 
 
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*stephinika*
post Apr 24 2005, 02:04 PM
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yeah i thought the same as the rest when i saw the title, i quite like how its written though. it flows so well and the words you used helped convey your message nicely. good job!
 

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