Inspiration has hit!, Finallllly. Options

[Rachel]

Well I was on the plane to Chicago on Friday, just sitting there and listening to The Used when all of a sudden, I was inspired. To my despair my mom did not have any paper. So what did I write this beauty on? A NAPKIN!!! I felt soo....artsy anyways enjoy. There isn't really a structure. I wouldn't really call it a poem. It just, well, came to me. You can comment, critique, cry, laugh...whatever! I just felt like sharing

I still remember the first day we met.
I was the new girl, you were the class clown.
Almost immediately I knew we were going to be friends.
What I did not expect, was love.
True love.
You just stole my heart with your big blue eyes and sweet smile.
Our first date was with your parents.
I came late, you had already paid.
I, of course, forgot my key and had to go home with you.
When my parents finally came an hour later, they hit it off with yours.
I was there for another three hours.
The next day, I was back at your house.
We were on your bed, it was 11:11.
You told me to make a wish.
A few minutes later, you turned to me and suprised me with a kiss.
It was our first and one of many.
Then a few minutes later, your dad walks in!
God that was funny.
We may be young but I know our love is real.
You are my rock and you are my soul.
You have this effect on me, I cannot really put it into words.
You just understand me, you get me and accept me for who I am.
I love you for that.
You truly are amazing.
I cannot stand it when we are apart.
To quote The Used:
"Every second I'm without you
I'm a mess"
I really am.
All that I ask is please, please don't break my heart.

[*islandgirl4eva*]

It's so full of emotion and love that you bear for this person. I can feel it. It's so sweet Rachel. Reading this, I really hope that you are happy with this person forever. Good job.