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 Apr 19 2005, 04:36 PM
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 Inspired2.  Group: Member Posts: 160 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,756  |
Roses are red violets are blue,I fell madly in love with you.
I Tried to tell you but that would never do,so I decided to show you how I felt about you.When I saw you I felt good inside but when i came I was just pushed aside.My heart was shattered, my mind quaked.A soon as that happened my heart ached.I felt a pain I have never felt, I felt like I began to melt. Shortly after I felt ashamed to tell myself I was to blame.Now when I see you I feel no connection, I feel no affection for the one I onced loved... this poem was made durin a "sad" moment |
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Apr 20 2005, 03:34 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
I like it. Every bit of it, except this one "my heart was shattered, my mind quaked, as soon as that happened my heart ached"
don't get me wrong I like it.. but that part irks me. |
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