progression, power from pain... Options

[*islandgirl4eva*]

Feelings rise to the top,
Love fizzles and pops,
And then my heart stops.
My skin, it tingles,
As the tears drop in singles,
Panting from my chest,
Close my eyes to rest,
Because life is a climb,
We work all the time,
My heart still sings,
For wind in my wings,
To be able to fly,
And let my worries die,
I still wish for hope,
I'm bound in golden rope,
It keeps me together,
Always fairing rough weather,
Never taming my passion,
In any form or fashion,
Now I'm ready to go,
Just wanted you to know.

[*stephinika*]

ooh, i quite like this actually. the rhyming scheme is incorporated well and so it flows rather nicely. great word choices too. i really, really like this. nicely done as usual.