Hey i wasnt sure, hope it doesnt get closed Options

[saysaydaplay]

hey well i wasnt sure if i was allowed o ask for help here but im having a really hard time w/ this assignment . Well for english im supposed to be doing a monologue ....and im havign trouble putting mines together ..so far this is my whoel story :

i am a pregnant teenager who goes to the police to ell them that my boyfriend beat me up. then later on in the story ...i have a misscarriage ...

im having horrible writers block ..? ..and was wonderin if anyone could help ...or if anyone could fix the sroy so it would be easier to do ?
thanx

[*suddenly she*]

cliche is very bad. that's what i tell everybody even when they don't use cliches. :)

describe the setting and the people a lot.. describe the room where the miscarriage took place and talk about colors. it was cold, and the walls were painted blah. masked nurses and surgeons (or whatever they are) silently circled the room with tools, making notes and incisions. occasionally their brows would furrow in frustration or disbelief. paint the picture of the miscarriage, it shouldn't be too hard. also, note the expression of the people when they find out.

be sure to have the boyfriend's persona well thought out, so his personality carries into everything he does.

seems like an interesting assignment. i don't think i'm much of a writer, but these sort of things are fun.