lovers loss in a stage of insanity Options

[TreesTurnMeOn]

it was sorrow
it was hope
it was a plea for one small signal
that proved she was worthwhile
she was losing her mind in stages
the first stage was doing weird things
and she second stage was not caring anymore
because the pain was the only thing in this place
that fit her
the bottom finally arrived
she crashed against it
but it brought no sense of closure or understanding
she just lay the bottom looking up
she knew there must be
a very tiny circle of light
up there somewhere
but just now
she couldnt see it.

[TreesTurnMeOn]

Good. That was the effect I was looking for.

And thanks a lot!