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 Apr 13 2005, 06:44 PM
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hey well i wasnt sure if i was allowed o ask for help here but im having a really hard time w/ this assignment . Well for english im supposed to be doing a monologue ....and im havign trouble putting mines together ..so far this is my whoel story :
i am a pregnant teenager who goes to the police to ell them that my boyfriend beat me up. then later on in the story ...i have a misscarriage ... im having horrible writers block ..? ..and was wonderin if anyone could help ...or if anyone could fix the sroy so it would be easier to do ? thanx  
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Apr 16 2005, 07:04 PM
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Something how the girl struggles to get to the police station because she is tired and weak from her boyfriend beating her up, and she's limping, etc. Then she finally gets there, and faints or whatnot. You could say something like, "and all I remember after that was darkness" if she fainted. Then she wakes up and she's in the hospital, and the doctors and nurses are monitoring her, but then she finds out she's had a miscarriage, I guess because her boyfriend beat her up. If that helps any.
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saysaydaplay Hey i wasnt sure Apr 13 2005, 06:44 PM
InLove_x Hmm. I suck at writing so I can't really help ... Apr 13 2005, 06:51 PM strwbrrykiwi23 i think you have a good start...
you should put mo... Apr 13 2005, 06:54 PM saysaydaplay oh thanx ...i didnt kno we had a hwwork board? ..l... Apr 13 2005, 07:07 PM IamRad wouldnt this belong in the homework section? but s... Apr 13 2005, 08:18 PM Nicolatofu ^ yes, this should go in the homework section.
An... Apr 13 2005, 08:31 PM mouse_3k -Moved to Homework section-
(Not sure to put this ... Apr 13 2005, 08:32 PM Shattered_Hope Pretend that it is something real happening to you... Apr 13 2005, 08:53 PM saysaydaplay thanx every one a lot .. =) Apr 14 2005, 09:08 PM suddenly she cliche is very bad. that's what i tell everybo... Apr 19 2005, 09:14 PM
Sweet_Kiwi1992 Since you have writer's bock, you should stop ... Apr 26 2005, 02:02 PM |
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