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Hard Times
wounded
post Apr 15 2005, 05:39 PM
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Hey. I wrote this during Biology today. I hope that you like it.

Hard Times

I'm not too sure where I'm going,
But I know where I've been.
I'm not too sure that I like that,
For I fear that I have sinned.

Who I am is who I'm not,
It all seems so surreal.
Who I was was a danger to all,
Back when I couldn't feel.

My eyes shut in a final warning,
My energy is fading fast.
This time I don't mind too much,
The hard times have passed.
 
 
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soulless727
post Apr 16 2005, 07:02 PM
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wounded   Hard Times   Apr 15 2005, 05:39 PM
Kathleen   Haha writing in class is fun! Hehe. I like it...   Apr 15 2005, 07:16 PM
wounded   Class sucks. We did nothing in school, except for ...   Apr 15 2005, 07:46 PM
xcaitlinx   i really like it! 2 thumbs up for sure.   Apr 15 2005, 11:02 PM
KERP1UNK   wow! thats really good. i wish i could write...   Apr 16 2005, 12:22 PM
wounded   thanks. :)   Apr 16 2005, 01:41 PM
wounded   thanks. :)   Apr 16 2005, 01:41 PM
yukichan   I like the ending....good job..   Apr 16 2005, 03:15 PM
soulless727   bravo   Apr 16 2005, 07:02 PM
RiddleMeWonders   Touche. I like it, it starts off like that old so...   Apr 16 2005, 07:59 PM
wounded   what old song? -blink-   Apr 16 2005, 11:06 PM


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