life as we forget it, a pretentious, arty poem |
 Apr 16 2005, 07:11 AM
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life as we forget it
breathe the ocean and sing the flames scorch the fire drown the rains live for the sandstorm be for the wind sob for the laughter and laugh through the pain hide in the fog the hour class drips sand the time is running out the swans coming in to land breaking the change the shifting sea of same hold onto the cliff face you'll never be young again lol... my goodness... someone was feeling artistic this morning... |
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Apr 16 2005, 03:20 PM
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ooh, i love it james! i really, really do. the words you used are well-chosen and the images that come to mind are great. well done as usual.
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racoons > you life as we forget it Apr 16 2005, 07:11 AM
MyVermilionPlague Oooooh, I really like that, James!
Lovely work... Apr 16 2005, 01:48 PM yukichan wow i like it!i like the laugh through the pai... Apr 16 2005, 03:14 PM RiddleMeWonders QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Apr 16 2005, 7:11 A... Apr 16 2005, 03:17 PM
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