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 Apr 15 2005, 05:39 PM
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 Do you miss your little girl?  Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851  |
Hey. I wrote this during Biology today. I hope that you like it.
Hard Times I'm not too sure where I'm going, But I know where I've been. I'm not too sure that I like that, For I fear that I have sinned. Who I am is who I'm not, It all seems so surreal. Who I was was a danger to all, Back when I couldn't feel. My eyes shut in a final warning, My energy is fading fast. This time I don't mind too much, The hard times have passed. |
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Apr 16 2005, 12:22 PM
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 i <3 peter Group: Member Posts: 744 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 125,986 |
wow! thats really good.
 i wish i could write that well!
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wounded Hard Times Apr 15 2005, 05:39 PM
Kathleen Haha writing in class is fun! Hehe. I like it... Apr 15 2005, 07:16 PM wounded Class sucks. We did nothing in school, except for ... Apr 15 2005, 07:46 PM xcaitlinx i really like it! 2 thumbs up for sure. Apr 15 2005, 11:02 PM wounded thanks. :) Apr 16 2005, 01:41 PM wounded thanks. :) Apr 16 2005, 01:41 PM yukichan I like the ending....good job.. Apr 16 2005, 03:15 PM soulless727 bravo Apr 16 2005, 07:02 PM RiddleMeWonders Touche. I like it, it starts off like that old so... Apr 16 2005, 07:59 PM
wounded what old song? -blink- Apr 16 2005, 11:06 PM |
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