Father Loves Daughter |
Father Loves Daughter |
| *Kathleen* |
Apr 15 2005, 02:13 PM
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A defiant glare and witty remark
Was clearly all it took Slumped in the corner, head down As the coroner came to have a look Death, he reported near midnight, Was massive blood loss Blunt trauma to the head - 'Twas the high price death clearly cost Mr. Niceguy to wife and friends, But madness festered beneath Beneath the façade of success But unfortunately far too deep The short hand strikes at eleven Gasping as her senses fail, Her life lets go its grip As this nears the end of her tale Malice and lunacy coincide As he staggers further back With no regret For the fatal end of attack |
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Apr 15 2005, 05:41 PM
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![]() Do you miss your little girl? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
Wow. You are an awesome writer; this poem is a true story that tells it all. Keep up the good work. :)
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Kathleen Father Loves Daughter Apr 15 2005, 02:13 PM
ryfitaDF oooooooh. spellbinding, kinda. very visual. nice w... Apr 15 2005, 02:29 PM
islandgirl4eva I see this whole thing playing out like a movie. I... Apr 15 2005, 03:43 PM
x3__iGiVEup Sorry my vocabulary isnt that good. Is this poem s... Apr 15 2005, 05:22 PM
MyVermilionPlague Very, very nice work, Kathleen.
It painted a vivid... Apr 15 2005, 06:48 PM
Kathleen Aww thanks, you guys! And yes, x3__iGiVEup, t... Apr 15 2005, 07:13 PM
wounded You know how morbid that is? -grins- Apr 15 2005, 07:48 PM
xcaitlinx i could really picture (unfortunately) all of the ... Apr 15 2005, 10:58 PM
gladz612 nice words... Apr 21 2005, 11:40 AM
Rachel is love ^You are annoying.
And Kathleen, it is AMAZING... Apr 21 2005, 12:19 PM![]() ![]() |