i made this poem., a poem for insomniacs.. |
 Apr 12 2005, 03:38 AM
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it was past midnight still my soul drifts by it was past midnight i can see the stars tonight it was past midnight dreaming of nothing just a sleep it was past midnight no music played by the heartbroken it was past midnight cars fled, passing by the dark curve it was past midnight thinking about my own past it was past midnight hoping to close my eyes and say goodnight it was past midnight slumber oh please visit me gently it was past midnight later on i'll see the light just hug me tight passing another midnight circles in my eyes... *************************************************** iam not sure if it is a poem but well its poetry anyway!  hope you'll like it! 
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Apr 13 2005, 08:08 PM
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THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENTS!
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wickedcurse i made this poem. Apr 12 2005, 03:38 AM
stephinika i loved it! yes its a poem. wonderful poem to... Apr 12 2005, 09:31 AM agirlnamed_aly I liked it, the repetition of words especially mad... Apr 12 2005, 08:40 PM
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