My sunshine. Options

[xTINAA]

It's basically the same type of feeling that can be seen in all my writing that I've posted, but I felt like posting it anyway.

Hey there sunshine. Did you know you brighten my day? Your smile lights up my world. You make me feel warm inside. See that twinkle in my eye? It's from you. You're everything to me and more. My world revolves around you. Everything would be dull and meaningless if I didn't have you. There would be no life within me. Oh wait. What's that I see? I see a rainstorm moving in. Dark clouds fill the once baby blue sky. No longer do I feel warm but instead cold and lonely. That's not a twinkle in my eye but instead a tear, slowing flowing down. My once bright smile is now ripped away and instead replaced with an ugly frown. My world has come crashing down and everything's in chaos. I see no green, no life. It's all hazy and grey. Where did you go? You were my sunshine and now you're gone. You were my everything and now you're nothing. Nothing but a bitter memory that replays over and over in my mind.

[*stephinika*]

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ooh i like that comment, i agree! but yeah, the turnaround at the end works well with the writing and i can just imagine how you feel in this. nice work.