What if..., OLD poem I wrote |
 Apr 4 2005, 04:41 PM
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What if life wasn't as it seemed,
or what it would appear? Would you live your life the same, or live your life in fear? We live our lives day by day, in this miserable world. Only to be shunned by others, and cornered by the world. What if we were all the same, no race, no color, no religion? Would it all still be the same, or is that only what I envision? Life never seems to work out, nothing ever gets done. Is it the same for everybody, or am I the only one? |
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Apr 4 2005, 09:32 PM
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 highfive. Group: Member Posts: 1,301 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,951 |
Wow. I like it. It's pretty good. Especially the concept.
I don't think that life would ever work out if everything was the same. Everyone would be the same; doing the same; just boring. |
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OMENsean What if... Apr 4 2005, 04:41 PM
x_y0urElectrikk Amen to that.
good poem. Good Poem Indeed. Apr 5 2005, 04:49 PM HoodieObsessed that reminds me of The Giver, it's a book I ha... Apr 28 2005, 02:08 AM
yukichan QUOTE(HoodieObsessed @ Apr 27 2005, 9:08 PM)t... Apr 28 2005, 03:47 AM ..:loveee.NuTTii I like the concept...it makes you think. Apr 28 2005, 03:55 PM iNyCxShoRT Nice<3 Wow that was really good, really makes y... Apr 30 2005, 11:21 AM Shortiiex ^ agreed it makes you really think Apr 30 2005, 10:53 PM toodlepops. Yeah, really makes you think. Really does.
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