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the end., a poem by ME
teeners4
post Mar 31 2005, 12:29 AM
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tell me what you think wink.gif i dont think its the best it was a splurge i just wrote one day when i got mad at a friend.


The End

We started out not the best,
You and I we got along,
just fine.

a year passed and we stayed,
acquaintances.
i dont know what happened, but it became stronger,
we started to get along,
Finishing each other's sentences,
knewing it would last.

We planned our grad,
university,
our first dorm room,
our first apartment.

we were branded as close as close can be,
like peanut butter and jam,
sure we had our ups and downs,
but what friendship doesn't?

For 2 years we led this,
nothing could tore us apart,
then suddenly, I don't even know,
what happened.

Thing began to change,
we acted like it was okay,
but we know it isn't,
maybe you still act,
i know you fake through life,
just a bit.
i do too.

maybe you're just trying to keep your cool,
trying to find comfort in another.
avoiding me,
maybe you care about what others think,
don't want to them to think you're a loser,

you don't want to lose your status,
i understand.
maybe it was only meant to last for 2 years,
all i know is that,
we were friends,
the best of the best,
for 2 years,
the end.
 
 
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yukichan
post Mar 31 2005, 02:36 AM
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aww so sad... cry.gif i like it though..good job.. thumbsup.gif
 

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teeners__15   the end.   Mar 31 2005, 12:29 AM
yukichan   aww so sad... i like it though..good job..   Mar 31 2005, 02:36 AM


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