its another poem, they just keep coming |
 Mar 26 2005, 08:21 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
its hard
and it sucks but you do it for the birds and the bees and for me for the faeries for the creatures for the demons and the people know you destroy you bleed you caress you and make you feel like the bestest piece of shit its in your blood in the veins in the body in the ground underground awake asleep and dreaming of a nightmare |
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Mar 29 2005, 04:47 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
I think it is good work james :) It is random, but at the same time it ties together so perfectly. Keep submitting :)
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racoons > you its another poem Mar 26 2005, 08:21 AM
racoons > you ok this got over looked, and i want an opinion, so... Mar 28 2005, 04:17 PM trail_of_memories lol, since u want a critique so bad- Wondering wha... Mar 28 2005, 04:54 PM Rachel is love i like it!! and i like the random long lin... Mar 28 2005, 04:58 PM smthngcrprategrl34 i like it a lot. i like the randomness of it Mar 28 2005, 07:04 PM
ryfitaDF "bestest piece of shit". classic. hehe. Mar 29 2005, 03:40 PM |
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