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An Unfortunate Metaphor
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post Mar 28 2005, 02:12 AM
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Life is a decrepit, however invaluable crystal fixture;
Its features so delicate, however so complex;
Its packaging so important, however so haphazardly finished;
It's up to the UPS man; perhaps his day has been lackluster;
Perhaps his wife left him, and stole away his children;
And, perhaps, he's still a silhouette in a quickly advancing human race;
And, perhaps, he drops your package;
With a crash, your precious crystal privilege pours onto the ground;
It pulsates with a violent, rhythmic ripple, calypso-esque;
It makes a vile puddle of shattered value;
And, at the end of the day, the purpose is clear;
The purpose is the package; importunate;
And, at the end of the day the question is clear:
What can brown do for you?
 
 
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Rachel
post Mar 28 2005, 02:37 PM
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i've never wanted anything rationale.
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i love it! the imagery and language is fantastic!
 

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CrackedRearView   An Unfortunate Metaphor   Mar 28 2005, 02:12 AM
Rachel is love   i love it! the imagery and language is fantast...   Mar 28 2005, 02:37 PM
racoons > you   <3 its so good! *jealous of brain of jus...   Mar 28 2005, 02:51 PM
stephinika   fabulous! i love it. very well done.   Mar 31 2005, 07:33 PM


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