Little Bit Of Nothing, ...a poem |
 Mar 25 2005, 11:54 PM
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Little Bit Of Nothing
I've got nothing and that is going to make me cry My life is currently void Empty Of all serious meaning I'm alone. Broken after a long relationship. I love you she said. I love you... How can those three little words... bring a man to tears? I've got nothing Nothing As I sit I try to write something anything Unlike me, this isn't my style.... What is my style? Surly not this forced piece of shit This isn't a poem but a rant and a rave Some tears and some sorrows I'll be better tomorrow... then... still with nothing I'll regret writing this this... TxT copyright©2005 BeyezB |
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Mar 27 2005, 10:06 PM
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 i've never wanted anything rationale. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045 |
i loooove it! esp. the part about saying I love you.
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BlueEyezBlind Little Bit Of Nothing Mar 25 2005, 11:54 PM
ItzOnlySydney whoa thats good. Mar 25 2005, 11:56 PM racoons > you it is excellent... but what happened with all the ... Mar 26 2005, 08:22 AM BlueEyezBlind Oh..the site wasn't responding when I posted t... Mar 26 2005, 08:44 AM racoons > you ^^ no worries... actually i think its happened to ... Mar 26 2005, 09:11 AM i heart john Very, very nice. Mar 27 2005, 10:39 PM
`SWTWiNKLE3YES u did a nice job on this .. really good. Mar 28 2005, 12:41 AM |
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