Mon doux (My Sweet), Short lil french poem by me... |
 Mar 21 2005, 10:53 PM
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Sigh...my last poem..."From Faith" wasn't even looked at...but here is another.
I will not give the translation. It's a short little poem about true love and staying with the loved one forever. If you know french, great...if not, it's still fun to read even if you don't understand every word. Mon doux Vous prenez mon souffle Par cette distance Je suis vôtre Je suis la limite à vous amour éternel.... Nous serons Ensemble toujours Dans esprit Vrai Amour Vous êtes Majestueux |
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Mar 25 2005, 04:00 AM
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Then why don't you homosapiens translate it?
My soft one You take my breath By this distance I am yours I am the limit to you eternal love. ... We will be Together still in True spirit Love You are Majestic I think it's very nicely written. I can definetly feel the emotion you were going after. |
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Mar 25 2005, 05:18 PM
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QUOTE(WhiteLotus* @ Mar 25 2005, 4:00 AM) Then why don't you homosapiens translate it? My soft one You take my breath By this distance I am yours I am the limit to you eternal love. ... We will be Together still in True spirit Love You are Majestic I think it's very nicely written. I can definetly feel the emotion you were going after.  Wow...somebody found FreeTranslation.com....Sheesh don't ever use the free version. It doesn't translate properly. "My sweet You take my breath Through this distance I am yours There is no limit eternal love... We will be Together In spirit True Love You are Majestic" there :) |
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