the painter, my second poem |
 Mar 24 2005, 01:50 PM
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yea i wrote this last night at like midnight
tell me what you think.... The Painter Each visit to the mirror Is a horrifying lie Being born That I am forced To witness everyday I have become an expert At painting Every mask Every lie Orchestrating the strokes So perfectly That no one can see The empty shell That I have become I have turned Into the person That I never wanted to be A life full of Shattered images And broken lies That were never real |
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Mar 25 2005, 01:21 PM
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to hell with you Group: Member Posts: 2,547 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,506 |
wow. a very imaginative and creative idea. it should be made into a song.
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krispy_kreme333 the painter Mar 24 2005, 01:50 PM
KissMe2408 phew, nice :) Very deep. I liked how you called it... Mar 25 2005, 12:35 AM
krispy_kreme333 QUOTE(KissMe2408 @ Mar 24 2005, 11:35 PM)phew... Mar 28 2005, 10:29 AM trail_of_memories I like ur title, the concept in, I can relate to i... Mar 28 2005, 11:12 AM smthngcrprategrl34 i like the concept of it and the poem is brilliant Mar 28 2005, 07:05 PM stephinika great idea and written well. strong words. keep up... Mar 31 2005, 07:32 PM |
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