You Said You Loved Me, a short song/poem |
 Mar 22 2005, 04:55 PM
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You Said You Loved Me
My world was a mess Then everything I was turned inside out You took my heart, gave me your trust Then you said you loved me You had me upside down twisted right side in Then... My trust, torn all to hell bits and pieces Heh, who needs it? You said you loved me You said you loved me I took your heart, gave you all my trust Then baby you said you loved me What was I supposed to say? I'm sorry... What more could I do? I said I loved you.... I took your heart With your best friend twice last year txt©2005 BeyezB |
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Mar 25 2005, 12:37 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
lol wow was really good, i totally wasn't expecting the best friend thing part at the end. but great job :)
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BlueEyezBlind You Said You Loved Me Mar 22 2005, 04:55 PM
smthngcrprategrl34 that's good. when you said "heh who needs... Mar 22 2005, 06:01 PM xXirockhardXx Its nice. I like it. Mar 22 2005, 09:09 PM Levy2k6 the best friend thing was pretty.. wow. haha. Mar 23 2005, 04:09 PM yukichan wow..that was good..good job.. Mar 23 2005, 06:46 PM xXMomoBubbleTeaXx That was realli good!!!...I loved how ... Mar 25 2005, 03:20 PM
x3__iGiVEup Great. Sounds alot like a song with the repitition Apr 10 2005, 05:38 PM |
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