heartache is the perfect inspiration |
 Mar 17 2005, 11:43 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
not finished. i'm tired.
HEARTACHE IS THE PERFECT INSPIRATION This pen, this lonely pen He is my only friend My love and I subset Filling me with regret So… I WRITE IT (DOWN) can’t even sleep a wink my blood is in this ink I take my heartache And smear it on this paper This night that fate betrayed me The price I can’t stop paying Those long lost summer evening Begin my tortured grieving So… I WRITE IT (DOWN) can’t even sleep a wink my blood is in this ink I take my heartache And smear it on this paper She always found the worst times To moisten both of my eyes Her apathy is astounding That night, I woke my family with the KEYBOARD POUNDING! So… I WRITE IT (DOWN) can’t even sleep a wink my blood is in this ink I take my heartache And smear it on this paper |
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Mar 22 2005, 06:04 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
the stuff you wrote is so true. it's really good
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ryfitaDF heartache is the perfect inspiration Mar 17 2005, 11:43 PM
Teesa that's really true..all the things that you wr... Mar 17 2005, 11:46 PM M1SSxCHR1SSY I love it. I can relate to it. The way you describ... Mar 17 2005, 11:54 PM Kathleen Aww...I really like that title. Mar 18 2005, 12:03 AM ryfitaDF thanks, fellas! i'm writing another song r... Mar 20 2005, 12:59 AM MyVermilionPlague Oh my God, I love it.
Just....wow.
And to think it... Mar 20 2005, 03:27 AM yukichan nice poem..i can really relate to it.. Mar 20 2005, 03:44 AM Rachel is love I take my heartache
And smear it on this paper
^... Mar 20 2005, 09:57 PM islandgirl4eva Heartache really is my numero uno source of inspir... Mar 20 2005, 10:20 PM Levy2k6 that was pretty good, one of the only cb writting ... Mar 20 2005, 10:28 PM salcha i lovvee it: i take my heartache and smear it on t... Mar 22 2005, 03:10 AM WhiteLadyOfRohan I love it Mar 22 2005, 12:09 PM
BitterSweetness you're really talented...that poem was awesome Mar 22 2005, 06:38 PM |
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