Recognition, Who Am I? |
 Mar 21 2005, 11:59 PM
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From this slumber I wake to a world outside the norm
Nothing is familiar, everything is odd Their bodies are the same but their souls are different Nothing like those that I've known before Fearing that the world as I know it has changed I actually open my eyes to see that I am alone Alone in my bed dreaming about being alone Yet the lonliness I dreamed of Was more than just physical solitude The lonliness was from failing to recognize these brown eyes staring back at me |
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Mar 22 2005, 02:41 AM
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Hmmm... I like it. It seems a bit different from your other work for some reason, but it's still good =]
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Mar 22 2005, 08:12 AM
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QUOTE(M1SSxCHR1SSY @ Mar 22 2005, 1:41 AM) Hmmm... I like it. It seems a bit different from your other work for some reason, but it's still good =]  Thats because it is. I have no clue what was going through my mind when I was writing this but it just came out all of a sudden when I was doodling on a napkin at lunch. It is a little... dark compared to what I normally write. |
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BrandonSaunders Recognition Mar 21 2005, 11:59 PM
x_y0urElectrikk I like it. Apr 3 2005, 07:31 PM stephinika i love it. something about it just grabs me. Apr 4 2005, 02:57 AM
Azarel loneliness* (Sorry, I had to.)
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