Dying Inside, how I feel everyday |
 Mar 17 2005, 03:55 AM
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Dying Inside
I scream as I hold my head and close my eyes, Yet everything is quiet, and a look of happiness sweeps my face, Tears start to pour out onto my gray cheeks, I feel myself slipping away, But I still stand here with this fake emotion, And I can't shake it off, it's glued on, like a mask, I try and kick to let this demon go, But I cannot let go... And I'm dying inside. ----- Okay, my first shot at an unrhyming poem... Kinda like a lot of other poems out there. |
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Mar 19 2005, 02:20 AM
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You never know what someone is going through and poetry like this is more than a means of ventilation, it's a cry for help and a shot at therapy. At least, that what it is for me.
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azn hunni xox Dying Inside Mar 17 2005, 03:55 AM
ItzOnlySydney i feel that way too sometimes. *hugs azn hunnie* i... Mar 17 2005, 03:57 AM
azn hunni xox QUOTE(ItzOnlySydney @ Mar 17 2005, 3:57 AM)... Mar 17 2005, 04:01 AM Teesa aw, feel better.. Mar 17 2005, 08:45 PM CRAZEDindian40 I like it, I think we all feel like that sometimes... Mar 18 2005, 09:03 PM M1SSxCHR1SSY I can relate to your poem. Although it might be si... Mar 19 2005, 02:07 AM azn hunni xox Thanks, glad you guys like it Mar 20 2005, 03:53 AM yukichan good job...hope u feel better... Mar 20 2005, 11:41 PM salcha its aiite, i can relate :/ Mar 22 2005, 02:24 AM |
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