How Cliche!, but yet, so true |
 Mar 19 2005, 01:51 AM
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Is it possible to fall victim to the cliches of hopeless romanticism?
It must be, because I'm a victim and I'm getting killed softly. All I want, depsite my ailing domestic woes, is that feeling, That feeling that humbles the loudest boast to shy whispers. I find it intriguing how I can sit and listen to a song about lost love and realize how much I have taken for granted in past relationships. However, going against my nature, I didn't blame myself for it and, yet, I refuse to push this issue further. My decision has been made, no relationship, no quest to rekindle the flame, just an attempt to shake these thoughts and move on. Besides, I could already be in love with a stranger... |
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Mar 19 2005, 01:54 AM
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wow, that last line really got me. I love your writing.
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Mar 19 2005, 02:16 AM
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QUOTE(bballbabiegrl @ Mar 19 2005, 12:54 AM) wow, that last line really got me. I love your writing.  Thanks a lot. BTW, I was trying to look at your Xanga but the colors throw me off. So I'm going to just subscribe and catch it in an email. These poems are all in my xanga because my xanga is my poetry journal. |
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BrandonSaunders How Cliche! Mar 19 2005, 01:51 AM
M1SSxCHR1SSY You write so well =] I like the last line but also... Mar 19 2005, 01:57 AM
BrandonSaunders QUOTE(M1SSxCHR1SSY @ Mar 19 2005, 12:57 AM)Yo... Mar 19 2005, 02:17 AM M1SSxCHR1SSY QUOTE(BrandonSaunders @ Mar 19 2005, 12:17 AM... Mar 20 2005, 01:02 AM wind&fire QUOTE(M1SSxCHR1SSY @ Mar 20 2005, 5:02 PM)
Aw... Feb 13 2006, 03:51 AM Sa-Chan Thank you...for this. It was beautiful. My boyfrie... Mar 19 2005, 09:49 PM BrandonSaunders I'm glad that my poetry could benefit someone ... Mar 19 2005, 10:36 PM BrandonSaunders Wait, wait...
I've met my stranger. Feb 13 2006, 02:02 AM BrandonSaunders Xanga.com/BrandonSaunders
buuuut, all the entries... Feb 13 2006, 04:16 AM wind&fire waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah... rejected T_T Feb 13 2006, 04:30 AM faithin_felix wow. please make them public! your writing is ... Feb 13 2006, 08:06 PM |
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