How Cliche!, but yet, so true |
 Mar 19 2005, 01:51 AM
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Is it possible to fall victim to the cliches of hopeless romanticism?
It must be, because I'm a victim and I'm getting killed softly. All I want, depsite my ailing domestic woes, is that feeling, That feeling that humbles the loudest boast to shy whispers. I find it intriguing how I can sit and listen to a song about lost love and realize how much I have taken for granted in past relationships. However, going against my nature, I didn't blame myself for it and, yet, I refuse to push this issue further. My decision has been made, no relationship, no quest to rekindle the flame, just an attempt to shake these thoughts and move on. Besides, I could already be in love with a stranger... |
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Mar 19 2005, 01:57 AM
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 hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
You write so well =] I like the last line but also
QUOTE All I want, depsite my ailing domestic woes, is that feeling, That feeling that humbles the loudest boast to shy whispers. It's all great though. |
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BrandonSaunders How Cliche! Mar 19 2005, 01:51 AM
Teesa wow, that last line really got me. I love your wri... Mar 19 2005, 01:54 AM
BrandonSaunders QUOTE(bballbabiegrl @ Mar 19 2005, 12:54 AM)w... Mar 19 2005, 02:16 AM BrandonSaunders QUOTE(M1SSxCHR1SSY @ Mar 19 2005, 12:57 AM)Yo... Mar 19 2005, 02:17 AM M1SSxCHR1SSY QUOTE(BrandonSaunders @ Mar 19 2005, 12:17 AM... Mar 20 2005, 01:02 AM wind&fire QUOTE(M1SSxCHR1SSY @ Mar 20 2005, 5:02 PM)
Aw... Feb 13 2006, 03:51 AM Sa-Chan Thank you...for this. It was beautiful. My boyfrie... Mar 19 2005, 09:49 PM BrandonSaunders I'm glad that my poetry could benefit someone ... Mar 19 2005, 10:36 PM BrandonSaunders Wait, wait...
I've met my stranger. Feb 13 2006, 02:02 AM BrandonSaunders Xanga.com/BrandonSaunders
buuuut, all the entries... Feb 13 2006, 04:16 AM wind&fire waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah... rejected T_T Feb 13 2006, 04:30 AM faithin_felix wow. please make them public! your writing is ... Feb 13 2006, 08:06 PM |
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