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[painfulserenity]

Heres some poems by me..would love you opinions..

Little One

she hears his footsteps echo in the hall
the numbers; they come again
over and over they fall
counting how many times he tears her apart
theres only so much in her tiny heart
she wishes he would go away
and leave her alone for just a day
but that wish; there is no way
he has to have her everyday
tied down and so naive
she feels her soul fall from a place unseen

The Scavenger
his eyes are searching
for the perfect piece
the only piece that can make her complete
over and over he can see it in his mind
but to his surprise it has been impossible to find
deeper and deeper he looks
the thought of giving up never gracing his mind
screws, bolts and books
he doesn't need those things
he needs something special
something only the heart can achieve


Daddy

mother why do you lie..
mother what did I do?
father why wont you hold me?
am I too broken and used?
mother can't you see
that i do this for you..
to make you believe in me..
to make you proud..
father can't you love me?
can't you tell me its ok?
why am I crying over things you'll never say..
why am I dying
just to be turned away..
mother I will continue loving..
despite your cold, hard ways..
father I will continue to admire..
the dad I know and love..
until you can see the beauty i have inside
I will walk this path carved into my mind..
maybe one day i'll meet you there..
and maybe..just maybe..
you'll finally care..

..I have plenty more..if you want to continue reading my poetry just say so

[painfulserenity]

thanks alot, heres a song and a poem I wrote the other day..

Halo
can you feel the rythm of her heartbeat
can you see the sunshine in her eyes
this beautiful afternoon
was once a memory in my mind

her halo's falling now
while the world is spining round
its to fast
she can't find the ground
her life is slowing down

he tried to hold her to his heart
wishing he could have held her from the start
but the world has the uppper grip
in her head she knew she would slip

her halo's falling now
while the world is spining round
its to fast
she can't find the ground
her life is slowing down

her silent screams
where louder than they seemed
her body floating higher
somehow rejected by gravity

her halo's falling now
while the world is spining round
its to fast
she can't find the ground
her life is slowing down

she's slowing down..
she can't find the ground..
her halo's falling down..
..say goobye

(that was the song)

Unsuspected Goodbye

..maybe I should be sorry
for things I say to you
maybe I should be sorry
for the way things look to you
I can't tell you all my secrets
because some you wont understand
If I showed you how I feel
I might scare you away
..theres too much in this fragile mind
too much for you to comprehend
darling, you know I loved you so
but I think its time for me to go
I know you wont ponder on this
because this is somehow an unsuspected bliss
this heart of mine is breaking from the vine
leaving yours to become intertwined
find the girl who fills your heart
..not the one who conviently tears it apart