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 Oct 18 2004, 09:47 PM
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cb=bullshit.  Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793  |
-- This was written during a lengthy lecture about Congress and the government. It was hard to concentrate because my teacher is loud when he speaks... but I tried. So here it goes...
[Look at me, I'm Mel and I'm lazy and I make Joe do everything I say!]  A Beautiful Disaster She stared up at the canopy of lights that hung above her falling down... down on top of her. It crashed on her life, pulling everything in deeper into the darkness of a sweet solitude. Flooding everything around her into a familiar misery and the lights swam out towards the others; those who mattered and also build off apathy. Yet, there were the observers who watched from the sidelines in awe; the destruction of an already beautiful life. But the darkness continued to collapse, folding upon a pitiful soul, drowning her in the glamour of beauty. Something she has always hoped for ….A beautiful disaster with a dark and envied enchantment. Her eyes grew lifeless but a supernova seemed to occur within them, an allured explosion, which then took the place of the previous flames. Waiting for the next person vulnerable enough, in which the cycle would continue…Always leaving from the drapery of radiance, into a beautiful, yet, pleasing disaster. Bleh.  --cB is being gay.... again... |
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Oct 18 2004, 09:53 PM
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cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 18 2004, 8:51 PM) It's alright, not your best work, but it's good. The beginning is awkward. Might wanna fix that.  YOU FIX IT FOR ME, FOOL.... you know my password... i'm lazy... and i suck at life.. omg i suck [slits wrists] |
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Mar 18 2005, 12:29 PM
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QUOTE(omg_melface @ Oct 18 2004, 9:53 PM) YOU FIX IT FOR ME, FOOL.... you know my password... i'm lazy... and i suck at life.. omg i suck [slits wrists]  hahahahahaha that was funny :) |
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omg_melface a beautiful disaster Oct 18 2004, 09:47 PM
MasteRxKiD It's alright, not your best work, but it's... Oct 18 2004, 09:51 PM
dispn0ygonekrazy o_O Oct 18 2004, 10:01 PM MasteRxKiD Yeah, couples are weird.
I had to edit that for he... Oct 18 2004, 10:10 PM dispn0ygonekrazy aww its like your her bytch.....if thats an approp... Oct 18 2004, 10:42 PM omg_melface Haha, but we're so cute together! Oct 18 2004, 10:43 PM Teesa aw, I thought it good. =) Mar 18 2005, 07:10 PM
Azarel I hate to repeat myself, but here it is anyway. Yo... Aug 9 2005, 03:57 PM |
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