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post Mar 17 2005, 03:54 PM
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I used to same rhyme scheme as always, but no worries, my recent works are beginning to digress from that.

Living in a doll house
I'm quiet as a small mouse
With the power you hold
I do as I'm told
Stiff in plastic
My thoughts are spastic
I spout poems and prose
But nobody knows
For the shame on my face
I live in disgrace
Do-up my hair
Make it look like you care
Parade me around
Let them see what you've found
I'm what you want me to be
Just an image, you see
No thoughts to speak
My brain is weak
I have no control
For I sold you my soul
To you, my dear maker
Chronic heart breaker
 
 
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alli
post Mar 17 2005, 08:08 PM
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yah its totalyy cool and true
 

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islandgirl4eva   broken barbie   Mar 17 2005, 03:54 PM
Teesa   I like it..I can also relate to this one.   Mar 17 2005, 06:52 PM
ibleedforvanilla   I like it. It's Totally awesome! Great Job...   Mar 17 2005, 06:57 PM
alli   yah its totalyy cool and true   Mar 17 2005, 08:08 PM
Just_Dream   Stiff in plastic My thoughts are spastic ^ Ooh I l...   Mar 17 2005, 11:19 PM
stephinika   very well written...absolutely lovely. great job n...   Mar 18 2005, 02:36 AM


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