uh...my parents suck Options

[Led-Zeppelin Lov...]

ok, here it goes:

You watch grow into this beautiful woman,
And think i can do it by myself.
I look up to for you help,
But you just sit around and watch
Me
As the years pass on,
I fend for myself,
But i go down the wrong path.
But you just sit around and watch
Me
My friends are all drug addicts,
I've come addicted to alcohol,
But you just sit around and watch
Me
I need your guidance,
Your help,
But since when do you care?
Because all you do is sit around and watch
Me
And something that was once your beautful daughter,
Has turned into a teenage whore.

yea, that last part was stupid and this isn't my best poem...and most of this isn't true...my parents are idiots and think they know what they're doing...well...tell me what you think......

[RandomHero]

Dude I like your username. Zeppelin!!!
The song/poem thing is ok. I just don't like how I guess you turned into a whore. (I'm not calling you a whore, that's what you wrote, so...) Need some work, but it's not bad.