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The Whisper
hrobert16
post Mar 16 2005, 09:16 PM
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I remember a time
In the subtle dark
When the breeze rattles the chyme
And dogs release their bark

A whisper came to me
Letting a secret in my ear
It said "They won't let you be"
After a pause, "You have much to fear."

After that, I could find no sleep
Unrest left me in dismay
Many children can only weep
When the whisper comes to stay

A cry at every bump
Desperation at every creak
Was it your sister falling on a nasty clump
Or a monsterous, one-eyed freak

What is the whisper and why am I its host?
Remember through your tears
The whisper is no man, nor ghost
It is everyone's childhood fears

Robbie Hastings (That's me =P)
3/16/05
 
 
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Teesa
post Mar 17 2005, 01:01 AM
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I love it, seems to calming, except for that part^
 

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hrobert16   The Whisper   Mar 16 2005, 09:16 PM
moon_child00   QUOTE(hrobert16 @ Mar 16 2005, 9:16 PM)Was it...   Mar 16 2005, 09:36 PM
Teesa   I love it, seems to calming, except for that part^   Mar 17 2005, 01:01 AM


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