It's Just A Dream |
 Apr 8 2004, 06:30 PM
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This is a short poem but I want to know your opinions.
It's Just A Dream I want to be close to you I never want to let you go I want to dream about you Wherever my mind flows I would want to think about you Every single step of the way I will always love you Even if my mind turns gray I have always wanted you No matter how hard it would seem But the worst part about it is It's just a dream |
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Apr 14 2004, 09:41 AM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
that's pretty damn good. i love poetry but none of that corny pointless shit. yours really had meaning behind it. i loved it.
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xtremeliquid It's Just A Dream Apr 8 2004, 06:30 PM
krnxswat QUOTEI will always love you
Even if my mind turns ... Apr 8 2004, 07:08 PM Just_Dream Aww that's so sweet =D Aww, u write poetry too... Apr 8 2004, 07:10 PM conster its really sweet.. and deep. but its so sad.. =( j... Apr 8 2004, 11:01 PM CEP Aww If that was based on some real dude. Lets bea... Apr 8 2004, 11:08 PM LQ_Darksoul I'll always love you...Even if I fling feces o... Apr 9 2004, 12:14 AM xtremeliquid I don't usually write poems but I like this on... Apr 9 2004, 01:52 AM Winter Wow it's really sweet.There should be more tho... Apr 9 2004, 01:56 AM dani41790 nyce poem. its nyce Apr 9 2004, 03:29 AM aznjammyjam nice poem =),
i hate dreams...well mines, when yo... Apr 9 2004, 05:59 AM xtremeliquid Yeah sometimes you wish those good dreams would co... Apr 9 2004, 01:29 PM ThePrincessofTKD though thoughts could be deceiving..
(Winter Po... Apr 13 2004, 11:42 AM liquidbluac1d QUOTE(chinkieeyedpnoi @ Apr 8 2004, 11:08 PM)... Apr 13 2004, 02:04 PM kaleidoscoped aw...is this based on a real thought/feeling/fanta... Apr 14 2004, 07:49 PM angel-roh awww seems like it's from ur mind...right? heh... Apr 14 2004, 11:49 PM
pyrochick19770 man..ur poem is totally relating to me right now..... Apr 14 2004, 11:52 PM |
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