I GUESS, THIS IS A POEM.. |
 Mar 15 2005, 07:12 PM
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A sweet embrace that caught my eye.
She had her eyes closed and her arms wrapped around him. She really was in love with him. His clutch was loose and he looked around. Was he embarassed? Was it all just a show? Did he know soemone was watching him? Was he watching a certain someone? My eyes caught his for a breif second. I wouldn't dare look him straight in the eye. His face was blank with hardly no expression. I turned and a sick feeling came over me. I just knew they wouldn't last and sadly...i was right. |
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Mar 15 2005, 10:19 PM
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It's great. How long did it take you? if it took less than 10 minutes, you are fit to be a poet someday
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ItzOnlySydney I GUESS Mar 15 2005, 07:12 PM
kyuubi319 i like it.. its quite sad Mar 15 2005, 08:40 PM ItzOnlySydney ^^i know. it actually happened to my friend he... Mar 15 2005, 10:14 PM Anime_Otaku I'm touched by your poem...and it's not ju... Mar 15 2005, 11:44 PM stephinika very nicely written. simple, but has a good story ... Mar 16 2005, 12:04 AM Teesa aw...how sad ..so much emotion involved in it. Mar 18 2005, 02:04 AM
ItzOnlySydney and to think it started out as a xanga entry lol Mar 18 2005, 11:58 PM |
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