rap pt.5, new rap again! Options

[*Statistik*]

f**k all the haters,
I be twistin bitches alot, have em sit on this cock
I wasn't prepared for this, I wrote my shit on the spot
I be droppin like early August, late July
Wit tracks that'll make you cry, hate you die
Stop frontin, you got no dough, might a had, but not no mo'
You mad cuz I knocked yo' hoe
While cops watch me, I got cats that watch po-po
My block loco, don't need a crew I rock solo
Or wit my nigga Gruff
These faggot niggas ain't as rich as us
I need chicks to lust, smoke my weed mixed wit dust
Go ahead and let your crew soup you up
In the ambulance, gon' have to come and scoop you up
f**k wit my last soul, my new shit is goin past gold
And if you don't agree, you's a a-hole
Mark my word, you gon' make me pump the bird
never hesitate to bump my gun
Kangsta World, y'all know where the f**k I'm from
I got two guns on my both hands
i reboot it before i shoot it
dont f**k wif me bitch
this is createblog yeah the home of the dead
f**k what they said
it dosent hurt me nor does it offend me
The game of life, got ups and downs, downs and ups
Kingpin cats lose they crowns in cuffs
Yeah chinks rap too, but still got them pies on the block
Bitches lookin at the size of my rocks, size of my knotts
Keep a stash box, ride wit them glocks

-Kangsta

still sucks? or improvement shown?

[sikdragon]

the funny thing is, it's about being real. You tryin to be. f**k these faggots that be hatin. Dont ask to get better. Dont ask for opinion. f**k them. That's the point of rap. You lay it out. But seriously tho if you gonna be real. be real. Dont try to be the image of a kangsta or whatever that is. Be you. They laugh cuz you're self-conscious. If you put it out there dont ask for if you did better. That says that you think it sucks. What people appreciate is confidence. in the words of that white faggot, "f**k all y'all if you doubt me, im a mutha f**kin piece of white trash, i say it proudly." thats how you should be. not white trash, but proud regardless.

You had a good flow to start, but you screwed it up at the end.

I dunno why the hell anybody would wanna be gangsta, its just a wannabe gangster. The only reason they aint gangster cuz they too pansy-assed worried about gettin shot or thrown in jail. Gangster doesnt get caught. Gangsta is hot-headed and loves the law.

Funnier thing, white people trying to be black people who trying to be whoppers, who tryin to be irish. and then oriental people trying to be white people trying to be black people trying to be whoppers, trying to be irish. It's sad. This only to the faggots who fit the stereotype. do you?(you is generalized)