all that's left, when did the love go? |
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 Mar 14 2005, 11:12 PM
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Sorry for the angsty, heart-broken bit here. I just hurts...sooooooo much. I thought it would be forever...
never thought i'd break meeting you was a mistake that look in your eyes holding all your lies the words off your lips they're giving me tips i'm getting the story of you and your glory you sleeping with girls fingers twirling in curls caressing their skin it's a game that you win having fun in your bed then you sleep like the dead call me the next day tell it all play-by-play you send me your heart but mine's torn apart i wish you'd never spoke for now my spirit's broke |
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Mar 15 2005, 12:20 AM
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 hello : )  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
Usually I have a problem when poems rhyme like yours but I really like it in this one. It fits well. It's a great poem. Is this the one you were telling me about? Anyways, hope things get better Naomi =)
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islandgirl4eva all that's left Mar 14 2005, 11:12 PM
Just_Dream Awww.. Boys are evil! Girls can be evil too l... Mar 14 2005, 11:16 PM stephinika aww i hope you feel better.
well written though..... Mar 14 2005, 11:49 PM islandgirl4eva ^^ lol...for some reason I always rhyme like this.... Mar 15 2005, 10:03 PM
Teesa feel better..love the way you rhyme Mar 18 2005, 01:28 AM |
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