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all that's left, when did the love go?
*islandgirl4eva*
post Mar 14 2005, 11:12 PM
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Sorry for the angsty, heart-broken bit here. I just hurts...sooooooo much. I thought it would be forever...


never thought i'd break
meeting you was a mistake
that look in your eyes
holding all your lies
the words off your lips
they're giving me tips
i'm getting the story
of you and your glory
you sleeping with girls
fingers twirling in curls
caressing their skin
it's a game that you win
having fun in your bed
then you sleep like the dead
call me the next day
tell it all play-by-play
you send me your heart
but mine's torn apart
i wish you'd never spoke
for now my spirit's broke
 
 
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*stephinika*
post Mar 14 2005, 11:49 PM
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aww i hope you feel better. flowers.gif
well written though..the rhyming works. thumbsup.gif
 

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islandgirl4eva   all that's left   Mar 14 2005, 11:12 PM
Just_Dream   Awww.. Boys are evil! Girls can be evil too l...   Mar 14 2005, 11:16 PM
stephinika   aww i hope you feel better. well written though.....   Mar 14 2005, 11:49 PM
M1SSxCHR1SSY   Usually I have a problem when poems rhyme like you...   Mar 15 2005, 12:20 AM
islandgirl4eva   ^^ lol...for some reason I always rhyme like this....   Mar 15 2005, 10:03 PM
Teesa   feel better..love the way you rhyme   Mar 18 2005, 01:28 AM


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