Useless, a doodle in spanish class. |
Useless, a doodle in spanish class. |
Mar 9 2005, 09:45 PM
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Useless
My heart is empty. For nothing is inside. and all the true of me. I must always hide. As I bleed painfully, my heart is pouring out. My mind, my whole world, always filled with doubt. All negative thoughts, there is not sudden good, and along the deserved lines of life, I don't do what I should. My good thoughts escaped. I don't have much or a lot. The only thing I wanted, was just sitting there to rot. It's like I couldn't capture. It's like I couldn't see, why musn't they love me, for as much as i love thee. The candle is burning. Time is running out, all my memeories avoided or blocked, plus all the pain shouts. Poison slips in at nine, at eleven or ten or five, and as I slowly close my eyes, this is my last goodbye. |
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Mar 14 2005, 09:39 PM
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![]() i'm a d0rk =) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 209 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 88,870 |
i really like it =) . i felt like that at one point of my life...
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xd0rkette Useless Mar 9 2005, 09:45 PM
--x who0ps nice poem (:
i like the last paragraph best ! ... Mar 9 2005, 10:32 PM
Azn_Angelx how dark. xp very nice. =] Mar 14 2005, 09:28 PM
bby_cutie that was great...i can almost imagine myself being... Mar 14 2005, 09:57 PM
fl1p_cal1_boii it was really a cool poem...it brought all my thou... Mar 15 2005, 10:55 AM
Teesa aw..how sad..my favorite part is the second paragr... Mar 18 2005, 01:28 AM
wounded really awesome poem. You've got a lot of talet... Mar 28 2005, 07:31 PM
krispy_kreme333 that was awesome. i loved the last paragraph. Mar 30 2005, 11:51 AM
racoons > you ^^
they are called stanzas.
i <3 the last stan... Mar 30 2005, 02:16 PM![]() ![]() |