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 Mar 13 2005, 03:28 PM
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alone when the trees talk to me rapping morse code on the window pain an SOS from the world out in the cold rain and the wheat sings to me snapping like a whip crack-clack from the world in the wind driving on down the road keeping up trotting on sanred by the vines tripping me spralling on the ground jaded thrist slated still drinking for the sake of going on why look back to the room where my heart left beating on the bed smiles and bleeds painless now anathesised its pointells to worry to cry i let it out forever and a day ago im past it why hate when you cant change it |
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Mar 14 2005, 02:35 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
lol no trans, it wasn't, its dyslexia. but i rather like it, so it may remain. lol
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racoons > you untitled Mar 13 2005, 03:28 PM
stephinika very nice. i like it. especially this part:
QUOTEw... Mar 13 2005, 03:29 PM xtransatlanticismx i like it. i think it's a little cliche with t... Mar 13 2005, 04:36 PM picaso_smile I hate it. (cause I can't ever write like that... Mar 13 2005, 05:17 PM
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