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[Sa-Chan]

I wrote this pretty quick...It's kind of how I'm feeling right now...No title...It's not very good.

I'm hiding in the shadows,
Of all the other girls you talk about.
A memory from yesterday,
That you've been to afraid to throw away.
But now you're older, wiser,
But you're still much younger than I have ever been.
Disappointment has worn me down,
Regret has become my bestfriend.
I never meant there were no chances for forever,
But you're already over it.
You say you need to think,
You need your time...away from me.
And last night I would have run away,
But I had nowhere that would take me in.
It's alright when you hurt me,
But I can't even talk to you.
Maybe this time I made a mistake,
But how many damn mistakes have you made?
More than one...more than two,
I can count on my fingers until I run out,
Could you possibly lend me a few?
I'm colder than I've ever been before,
That's thanks to you, congradulations,
Ding dong, the witch is dead,
You injected poison into her head.
She's either dancing with the angels,
Or burning with the Devil,
And now that she's gone,
Do you feel free?
She took the gun she found last night,
And pulled the pretty trigger,
And for love and life,
She delivered one shot,
Through one blue eye,
That you once said drew you in...

[*stephinika*]

beautiful...very emotional and heartfelt. very saddening...it just drew me in. i commend you on your work.