my short quote..written by me |
 Mar 11 2005, 09:59 PM
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alli  Group: Member Posts: 513 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,108  |
so i wrote this quote..tell me what ya think..i think i need to edit it a lil bit..so here it is..tell me what yah think!! ....
So as the sun started to set, and the waves continued to crash, she tucked herself into bed, no night kiss once again, but she would do the same thing again tomorrow, just because life goes on. leave comments! |
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Mar 13 2005, 02:47 AM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
Ehh.. It's okay. A bit more catchy, maybe?
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alli my short quote..written by me Mar 11 2005, 09:59 PM
korbana05 its good... sounds more like a poem than a quote t... Mar 11 2005, 10:12 PM alli kayy thanks! anyone else like it? Mar 12 2005, 11:07 AM
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