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rap pt.3, yo
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post Mar 6 2005, 07:28 PM
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yo brooklyn holla back
holla back yo yo yo
im feelin the flow
while i puttin on a show here yo
heads to my toe im straight up
i never cross da line, cuz i still shine
i drink coke and wine
even though im drunk, i still get crunk
your just a little titanic shit that just sunk
i say it to the world on my microphone
when i finish spittin to you
hope u dont regret when you die
cuz my life is just bout rappin
and ur life is just about wrappin gifts at macy's
and everyday you cry
cuz you have no cash or food
and i hang around good in ma rich neighborhood
i dont care if you bitch or whine
im gonna f**k u up and you'll be mine
my girl is asian, and u got something to say?
i have an occasion to rap
and when it finally turns out to an invasion
ill be aheaded of eminem's 8 mile freestyles
my girl looks like halle berry his looks like rick barry
yoyo check it out
when i investigated ur rap labels
they sucked more than abel
your gayer than adam and eve
matter of fact you have a vagina
and u f**ked adam and steve
watch yo self
 
 
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post Mar 12 2005, 10:14 AM
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I have too much time on my hands:

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yo brooklyn holla back
holla back yo yo yo
im feelin the flow
while i puttin on a show here yo

You used the word "yo" too much, dude... are u even from brooklyn? I can picture u getting jumped laugh.gif
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heads to my toe im straight up
i never cross da line, cuz i still shine
i drink coke and wine
even though im drunk, i still get crunk

You drink coke and wine? you don't get drunk from wine, and YOU'RE ONLY 12.
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your just a little titanic shit that just sunk
i say it to the world on my microphone
when i finish spittin to you
hope u dont regret when you die
cuz my life is just bout rappin
and ur life is just about wrappin gifts at macy's
and everyday you cry
cuz you have no cash or food
and i hang around good in ma rich neighborhood

Rich neighborhood? Is this supposed to rythme? Because I thought that raps were supposed to rythme.
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i dont care if you bitch or whine
im gonna f**k u up and you'll be mine
my girl is asian, and u got something to say?
i have an occasion to rap
and when it finally turns out to an invasion
ill be aheaded of eminem's 8 mile freestyles
my girl looks like halle berry his looks like rick barry

You have a girl? I feel bad for her.
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yoyo check it out
when i investigated ur rap labels
they sucked more than abel
your gayer than adam and eve

yo yo? gayer than adam and eve? since when were adam and eve "gay"? And it's 'you're'.
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matter of fact you have a vagina
and u f**ked adam and steve
watch yo self

Yes, I do have a vagina. Who's adam and steve? Ok???


YOUR "RAPS" ARE HORRIBLE.
 

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