CAN SOMEONE RATE MY FREESTYLE, CAN SOMEONE RATE MY FREESTYLE Options

[*nightmare4taki*]

CAN SOMEONE RATE MY FREESTYLE I JUST WROTE THIS

Im infamous when it comes to mobbin a mic with my country grammer/
I bring the pain and my punchlines hit harder than a hammer/
no apologies accepted so get your style corrected/
Cuz when i grab the mic i get highly respected/
Hate it or love it the underdogs on top/
From the left to the right i got it locked/.........down/
dont make me tear your block down/
mcs step up to me and get eatin like mickey ds/
I stunt so hard its like some kind of a disease/
I spit my bars with more than just fury/
I ball so hard it that the doctors cant cure me/

It sucks i know. But hey i try.

[*nightmare4taki*]

Just thought that i would stop by and add a reply/
Everybody always braggin about being so fly/
But the truth is my flow is so hot/
Unlike these other rappers im not trying to be biggie or pac/
Man you simple and im more complex than basic/
So when they hit u with the facts its hard for you to face it/
If the bullets get the flying try to dodge em like the matrix/
On the mike i dominate n*gs like a dominatrix/
So get back and dont get your face flipped/
Im not a gangsta but neither r u a blood or crip/